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shotty
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So everzone, vreau sã vp spun în primul rând, cã scriu doar în englezã
Aici veþi avea ocazia sã citiþi binecunoscutele mele ficuri, ce sunt in top pe alte forumuri internaþionale xD
[+18]One-Shot[Never Again]Bill
The cold water filled the bath tub, and it was trickleing slowly on it's white outside surface...Off her hands that were hanging almost lifeless on the curved boundaries of the bath tub...were falling small and glacial water drops...The ring she had on her finger, droped on the floor...
I hope the ring you gave to her
turns her finger green
I hope when you’re in bed with her
you think of me
Her face dissapeared fast under the liquid surface...Her eyes were still opened, but she was totally numb...It was the end...
The bathroom's floor was filling with the water that came up as she was drowning into it...
She could only see his hands fading away as he gave up on drowning her. He loosened the grip and let her reach the depth of water...the depth of life...
He draw out and revealed his hand, then slowly shake his hands, trying to get rid of the water that had the wight of guiltiness that was going to drag him down, that was going to follow him for the rest of his life, for what he has done.
I never read your letter
'cause I knew what you’d say
But i could tell
by the flames that burned your words
Last thing she saw from under water was his revealed, evil, and at the same time full of fear smile...She never thought that behind those chocolate brown eyes, was hidden a demon. She blinked underwater for the last time and saw his face aproaching to her's...She couldn't see his face, as the water was trembling above her...The extremities of his long negru hair soaked into "her" dieing water...and she read his lips in slow motion:
"Gooooooodbyyyyyyye"
He shook his hands one more time and faster wiped them up with a towel he found. Then he took the suitcase with money and hurried to live the house where he comited the crime. He felt weird. But he smiled, cuz he finally get rid of her, the one who believed and truly loved him.
He cheated on her, during their marriage. She new but she kept her mouth shut. She new that she had to tolerate him, to accept him the way he was. He was someone, the richest man in Europe, a ex-rockstar, a businessman now, the one she always loved, and always teared. He was the father of the child she was carrying, it's just he didn't knew...
And today he ended a dream, a life, that was carrying another, two lives. He ended the beautiful lie he created. He killed her with his own hands.
He got in the car and pressed the pedal, hurring to the airport...when he recieved a message from his lover, from the woman that teared them apart.
He felt a kind of anxiety inside...He felt like someone was behind him...He looked in the car's mirror and saw her face...
Terrified he turned back to see what he saw in the mirror...but there was no one.
He turned his head ahead, trying to concentrate on the road, that he was passing with a mad speed. The sound of the wind, and the cloudy and misty weather from outside was scary...
Suddenlly the music turned on...and she screamed in his ear
"Does it hurt???"
Bill turned horrified back, with his heart almost not beating...He just heard his voice...She was hunting him...But there was no one in his right...And again the voice:
"Does it hurt to know i'll never be there?"
He turned in his left...then the voice again...in his right
"I bet it sucks to see my face everywhere!"
He looked again in the mirror and saw her face, her wet face, with the make up leaked down her face...just like he saw her last time...underwater...she was beautifull...still...
The he felt a touch on his neck...when she shouted in his ear:
"It was you
who chose to end it like you did
I was the last to know
you knew
exactly what you would do"
"Simone..." he whispered her name
"You still remember my name? But how about her?"
"Julie..."
"I wonder If she really knows the truth about you"
"She knows it just like you"
"She servs you..."
He evily smiled. He liked that. He liked to have a slave at his feet, who would listen and do everything he says.
"Bill...remember...When your day will come...you'll die ALONE"
"Fuck you! Leave me alone! You're not here...YOU'RE FUCKING DEAD!" he screamed freakin out.
She dissapeared.
HE continued his way to the airport...He got out of the car not forgetting the suitcaise and hurried to buy the ticket to a place where SHE will never find him...
He aproached to the woman selling tickets and was tapping the desk in a nervous way...He looked in his right and saw there Simone...She mimicked the words:
"You'll see my face everywhere"
He blinked 2 times and let his head down covering his face with his left hand...HE saw here everywhere...After he took the tickets, not standing the pressure he went to the toilet and stopped in front of the wash-stand and washed his face with cold water...That should help...But when he raised his head to look in the mirror...there she was...he saw her...standing behind him...and talking in silence...
Never again will I hear you
Never again will I miss you
Never again will I fall to you
Never
Then she came closer to him and turned him around to face her...She put her hands on his face and squeezed his face in a painful grip...she wanted to show him the pain...and he could feel it now...She aproached to his ear and start shouting, making sure that her words will remain forever in his head, in his soul, in his memory:
Never again will I kiss you!!!
Never again will I want to !!!
Never again will I love you!!!
NEVER AGAIN!!!!!!
She pushed him with all her spiritual power...and Bill crushed into the mirrors...breaking all of them...All the pieces fell on him and cut his face, and his whole body...HE could feel the pain now...
She slowly faded away...but he kept on hearing her voice on and on...in his head....spining...driving him nuts...
Does it hurt
to know I'll never be there
But it sucks
to see my face everywhere
It was you
who chose to end it like you did
I was the last to know
you knew
exactly what you would do
And don’t say
you simply lost your way
They may believe you
but
I never will
I never will
I never will
Never again...
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Rock Star
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| Trimis: 22/07/2007 22:26 Titlul subiectului: |
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bravo shotty
ii tare super..
eu mai vreu..
mai pune 
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Normal people WORRY me...
I rock U suck..
All day I dream about SEX |
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shotty
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| Trimis: 22/07/2007 22:31 Titlul subiectului: |
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thnx iubita
:P
a sa mai pun
da mai vreau commenturi
muaaaaaah
<3 |
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Rock Star
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| Trimis: 24/07/2007 18:06 Titlul subiectului: |
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hey!! shotty i can't wait anymore...
haide continuarea.. mai pune
we want more..:D
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I rock U suck..
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shotty
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| Trimis: 24/07/2007 20:38 Titlul subiectului: |
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2na, dap aista ii one shot
:P
asta ii toata povestea
da mai am
dak vretz sa cititz amush postez :D
Irina thnx 4 da comment |
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shotty
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| Trimis: 25/07/2007 22:17 Titlul subiectului: |
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am postat liudi alte one shots
da spunetzi-mi daka vretzi sa cititzi o poveste lunga dea mea?
are 450 pagini in word |
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shotty
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| Trimis: 26/07/2007 10:05 Titlul subiectului: |
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xD
voi comentatz sh celelalte ff =)) |
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It's niiiice<3
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shotty
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| Trimis: 13/08/2007 23:43 Titlul subiectului: |
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da...sh asta ii numai 60% din da story  |
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